hello my name is mariam from owairaka primary school and i live in auckland.What i want to say about your work is that thats its amazing JIA. blog you later mariam
Dear Jia, I like how you have used full sentences to describe your mother. You could have included a photograph of your mother in this poem. I like your images you have used in your poem. How did you spend Mother’s Day with your mother? Did you share this poem with your mother on Mother’s Day How did your Mum react to the lovely poem you wrote?
Keep up the great learning.
From, Miss Paton -Teacher at Christ the King School
wow jia this poem is so good. i like the colours that you chosen
ReplyDeleteThank you Agnes!
Deletehello my name is mariam from owairaka primary school and i live in auckland.What i want to say about your work is that thats its amazing JIA.
ReplyDeleteblog you later
mariam
Thank you Mariam! I live in Auckland too!
DeleteDear Jia,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used full sentences to describe your mother. You could have included a photograph of your mother in this poem. I like your images you have used in your poem.
How did you spend Mother’s Day with your mother?
Did you share this poem with your mother on Mother’s Day
How did your Mum react to the lovely poem you wrote?
Keep up the great learning.
From,
Miss Paton -Teacher at Christ the King School