Ka pai Jia. I like that your poem is nice and clear and how you explained what you were learning. I love writing poems. Have you ever tried a haiku or a limerick?
I really like the way you have used your words and the layout you have used. But gread job with your layout and pictures I really like them , and also that picture in the corner. Hopefully this can help you maybe you could put in more stuff like what you do in school and what do youlike about school and learning.
Ka pai Jia. I like that your poem is nice and clear and how you explained what you were learning. I love writing poems. Have you ever tried a haiku or a limerick?
ReplyDeleteHi Phil! I am Jia, I am from Christ the king catholic school and I am 9 years old.
DeleteI appreciate you comment on my blog and thank you for the compliment. I have not tried the haiku or the limerick but I will try and do it.
Thanks again. Have a good day.
Your sincerely,
Jia
Let me know how you get on. I'd love to read them. If you like poetry check out this post from Rael @ Waikowhai
DeleteHi Jia,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great acrostic poem about learning.
What is your favourite thing to learn about?
Mrs Sullings
Hi, Jia I am KenP from Christ the King School.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you have used your words and the layout you have used. But gread job with your layout and pictures I really like them , and also that picture in the corner. Hopefully this can help you maybe you could put in more stuff like what you do in school and what do youlike about school and learning.
From KenP